考研英語(yǔ)待批改作文：

　　5-7分

　　第四篇

　　Dear sir，

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your kindness to lend me the umbrella. If it had not been for your assistance in lending the umbrella to me when it was raining， I fear that I would have been in trouble to get home.

　　Every one agrees that it was you who always helping others in trouble. Again，I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Yours sincerely

　　考研英語(yǔ)作文批改點(diǎn)評(píng)如下：

　　Dear sir，

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your kindness to lend me the umbrella. If it had not been for your assistance in lending the umbrella to me when it was raining， I fear that I would have been in trouble to get home.

　　Every one agrees that it was you who always helping(改為 helped) others in trouble. Again，I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Yours sincerely(加逗號(hào))

　　加名字

　　5分

　　小作文的字?jǐn)?shù)要求是100詞，不要少于100詞，否則是要扣分的。書信的寫作格式要牢記于心。要注意時(shí)態(tài)的一致性。雖然作文沒有什么大問題，但內(nèi)容過于簡(jiǎn)單，其實(shí)你可以把內(nèi)容再擴(kuò)充一下，用一些高級(jí)的詞匯和句型。

　　考研英語(yǔ)待批改作文：

　　5-7分

　　第四篇

　　Dear sir，

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your kindness to lend me the umbrella. If it had not been for your assistance in lending the umbrella to me when it was raining， I fear that I would have been in trouble to get home.

　　Every one agrees that it was you who always helping others in trouble. Again，I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Yours sincerely

　　考研英語(yǔ)作文批改點(diǎn)評(píng)如下：

　　Dear sir，

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your kindness to lend me the umbrella. If it had not been for your assistance in lending the umbrella to me when it was raining， I fear that I would have been in trouble to get home.

　　Every one agrees that it was you who always helping(改為 helped) others in trouble. Again，I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Yours sincerely(加逗號(hào))

　　加名字

　　5分

　　小作文的字?jǐn)?shù)要求是100詞，不要少于100詞，否則是要扣分的。書信的寫作格式要牢記于心。要注意時(shí)態(tài)的一致性。雖然作文沒有什么大問題，但內(nèi)容過于簡(jiǎn)單，其實(shí)你可以把內(nèi)容再擴(kuò)充一下，用一些高級(jí)的詞匯和句型。