考研英語待批改作文：

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　　Dear Sir or Madam ,

　　I just read an advertisement in internet about recruitment information. I would like to apply for a position as Chinese teacher .

　　I understand what should be instruction study of children .My proficiency of skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. I am a recent graduate of Beijing University with a graduate degree in Depatment of Chinese Launguage and Literature.In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as senior middle school. .

　　I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Sir or Madam ,

　　I just read an advertisement in internet about recruitment information. I would like to apply for a position as Chinese teacher .

　　I understand what should be instruction study of children .My proficiency of(改為proficient) skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. I am a recent graduate of Beijing University with a graduate degree in Depatment of Chinese Launguage and Literature(這里填專業名稱).In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as(serve as 后面加職位名稱) senior middle school. .

　　I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Ming

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　　同學你好，標點符號與后面的單詞要空一格。你需要提高英語的表達能力，另外，你對模版也不熟悉，建議你多看一些英語作文，熟悉一下這類作文的寫作思路。

　　考研英語待批改作文：

　　0-4分

　　第一篇

　　Dear Sir or Madam ,

　　I just read an advertisement in internet about recruitment information. I would like to apply for a position as Chinese teacher .

　　I understand what should be instruction study of children .My proficiency of skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. I am a recent graduate of Beijing University with a graduate degree in Depatment of Chinese Launguage and Literature.In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as senior middle school. .

　　I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Sir or Madam ,

　　I just read an advertisement in internet about recruitment information. I would like to apply for a position as Chinese teacher .

　　I understand what should be instruction study of children .My proficiency of(改為proficient) skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. I am a recent graduate of Beijing University with a graduate degree in Depatment of Chinese Launguage and Literature(這里填專業名稱).In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as(serve as 后面加職位名稱) senior middle school. .

　　I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Ming

　　4分

　　同學你好，標點符號與后面的單詞要空一格。你需要提高英語的表達能力，另外，你對模版也不熟悉，建議你多看一些英語作文，熟悉一下這類作文的寫作思路。