Yours sincerely

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Sir or Madam:(英語中用逗號) I am writing to apply for the position of accounting due to the information you published on the newspaper. As a young man whose primary interest is in accounting, I am eager to work in a company as an accountant. First , I have a outstanding skills in accounting .As a undergraduate student of Xiamen University ,I have passed five courses of ACCA, which shows my professional ability. Besides, I have woked(拼寫錯誤) in a company as an assistant of an accountant(可以直接說accounting assistant), so I am very familiar with the job . I think ,this job is fall in with my previous preparation. The record of my formal schooling and rewards are sent as a cover letter . I would be very grateful if I could have the chance to have an interview .Thanks for your time and consideration. 【 Yours sincerely(加逗號) Li Ming 】(這一部分都要位于右下角) 點評：8分寫的不錯，注意一下格式，不要在格式上丟分。