考研英語待批改作文：

　　Cover Letter

　　October 19,2011

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　Having seen your job offer advertised in Chengdu Daily Paper yesterday, I would like to apply for the position and I hope I might be able to interview with your training center.

　　I shall be very grateful if you will kindly let me know as soon as possible the prospect of success of my application.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Sir or Madam, Having seen your job offer advertised in Chengdu Daily Paper yesterday, I would like to apply for the position and I hope I might be able to interview with your training center(這里想要表達什么?). Im a Chemistry teacher at a middle school, (加連詞and)I received M.A. degree of Chemical Biology last year. The job described in your newspaper seems suited to my background, and Im confident that I would be able to perform the job to your satisfaction. I have enclosed my resume and I would be most obliged if you would give me the chance to interview your firm. I shall be very grateful if you will kindly let me know as soon as possible the prospect of success of my application. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 點評：5-6分不知道你應聘的是什么職業，第二段沒有介紹太多實質性的內容，而且最后一句的后半句可以去掉。

　　考研英語待批改作文：

　　Cover Letter

　　October 19,2011

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　Having seen your job offer advertised in Chengdu Daily Paper yesterday, I would like to apply for the position and I hope I might be able to interview with your training center.

　　I shall be very grateful if you will kindly let me know as soon as possible the prospect of success of my application.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Sir or Madam, Having seen your job offer advertised in Chengdu Daily Paper yesterday, I would like to apply for the position and I hope I might be able to interview with your training center(這里想要表達什么?). Im a Chemistry teacher at a middle school, (加連詞and)I received M.A. degree of Chemical Biology last year. The job described in your newspaper seems suited to my background, and Im confident that I would be able to perform the job to your satisfaction. I have enclosed my resume and I would be most obliged if you would give me the chance to interview your firm. I shall be very grateful if you will kindly let me know as soon as possible the prospect of success of my application. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 點評：5-6分不知道你應聘的是什么職業，第二段沒有介紹太多實質性的內容，而且最后一句的后半句可以去掉。