英語四級寫作計劃第一周第6天復習類范文
Test 1
框架搭建:由標題和提綱所列內容可知,本文應為一篇說明現象類作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段描述大學校園內舉辦 選秀 活動的情況;第二段說明校園 選秀 活動帶來的影響;第三段談談個人對 選秀 活動的看法。
Talent-search Show on Campus
In recent years , there has been a talent-search craze on college campus .Various talent-search shows , like Campus Superstar Competition , Happy Boy , have emerged one after another on campus . Moreover , these activities are almost the copies of those social talent shows from the form to the contents .
As everyone sees , talent shows are bringing great influence on college students . Above all , these activities enrich students after-class life and provide a good stage for students to show themselves . Also , by attending these activities , college students can improve their abilities in social cimmunication . However , talent shows have brought some negative effects . For instance , most activities have monotonous form and lack creativity , which influence to some degree the whole culture atmosphere on campus .
Form my point of view , college students need cultural and amusement activities like talent shows , but the overall quality of these activities should be improved . The activity organizers should increase the activity feature and take full account . With the improvement in quality , I believe , talent shows will go in playing an important role in college students life .
Test 2
框架搭建:由標題和提綱所列內容可知,本文應為一篇對策方法類作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段提出信息安全問題并描述其主要表現;第二段說明信息安全事故可能導致的危害;第三段說明應該如何解決信息安全問題。
Information Security
In recent years , information security has aroused widespread concem . With our stepping into information society , computer crimes keep rising and information security incidents occur frequently . Hackers , fraudsters and serious white-coolar ariminals emerge on the Intemet in an endless stream .
It is very clear that information security incidents are bringing great harm to the victims , including govermment departments , organizations , institutions and individuals . First of all , government may suffer from national security threats . With the help of computers and the Internet , spies and some weak-minded officials can disclose satate secrets via more advanced skills . Furthermore , companies may lose important trade secrets ; the publics and users comfidence will be damaged .
Considering seriousness of the problem , we should pay more attention to infor-mation security . Firstly , technology plays a vital role in solving this problem . Since no system can ever be absolutely safe , both prevention and detection techniques are necessary to information security management . Finally , organizations and companies should promote the awareness on information secunity to its staff . Only in this way can information security be guaranteed .
Test 3
框架搭建:由標題和提綱所列內容可知,本文應為一篇對比分析類作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段簡要介紹網絡文學的出現背景以及網絡文學的做優點;第二段分析網絡文學的缺點;第三段談談信人對網絡文學的看法。
Network Literature
Nowadays with the widespread of Intemet , network literature , as a new literature form , has gained much popularity . Compared with traditional literature , network literature has many advantages . Above all , it is easier to become popular , whether in terms of its form or its contents . In addition , with Intemet as its media , network literature has a stronger expressive force and a quicker spreading .
As every coin has two sides , network literature has also some disadvantages . For one thing , the creation of network literature goes towards fawning on common , of which we can find limited classic ones . For another , the administration and supervision on network literature are still not very sound and effective .
Weighing up the advantages and disadvantages of network literature , I think it is a beneficial supplement to traditional literature . Undoubtedly , Internet , as the media of network literature , provides a wider space for spreading and developing liteerature . But it is worth noting that many network literature works are written in a rough way . Therefore , people should have a good selection when reading literature works on line .
Test 4
框架搭建:由標題和提綱所列內容可知,本文應為一封道歉信,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段說明道歉緣由(沒能參加弟弟的畢業典禮)并向弟弟表達真誠的歉意;第二段詳細解釋沒能參加典禮的原因;第三段再次表達歉意并提出彌補建議。
An Apology Letter
July 5,2011
Dear brother ,
I am excessively sorry that I cant attend your graduation ceremony as I have promised . Now , I am writing you this letter to show my deep regret . Please accept my sincere apology with gratitude . I hope you will understand me and excuse me for my being absent .
I will be very grateful if you are kind enough to listen to my explanation . The reason why I cant attend your graduation ceremony is that I have already been arranged to attend a meeting next week in Nanjing . I have no way out because the things I have to do are of great importance to my company . Therefore , its not in my power to comply with your request .
Naturally , I would like to show my apology in person next month . I shall be obliged if you will kindly write and tell me when and where you will meet me next month . Once again , I would like to express my sincere apology for any inconvenience caused . Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation .
Sincerely Yours ,
Liu Yuan
Test 5
框架搭建:由標題和提綱所列內容可知,本文應為敘事類作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段描述吵架的背景,引出吵架當天的情景;第二段具體敘述吵架的原因、經過及結果;第三段談談個人感受以及從這次吵架中吸取的教訓。
A Quarrel in the Dormitory
Weeks ago , I witnessed a quarrel between my two roommates . It shocked me that two good friends fell out just for a very trifling matter .
I was in the morning at a weekend , when I was washing my face in the bathroom . Suddenly I heard Xu Lan and Wu Xin shouting at each other . I hurried to come out to see what happened . It turned out the noise of Wu Xins closing the door waked Xu Lan . Xu Lan thought Wu Xin deliberately closed the door heavily . Wu Xin didnt admit her fault . So they had a bitter quarrel . Though later they stopped quarreling under our persuasion , neither of them would like to apologize .
Such a quarrel leaves me to think a lot about dormitory harmony . If either Xu Lan or Wu Xin can be a littel tolerant or take a better way to express herself , this quarrel , I think , can be avoided easily . It is no doubt that a harmonious dormitory life benefits all the members , but it meeds our common efforts to build it .
Test 6
框架搭建:由標題和提綱所列內容可知,本文應為一篇對比分析類作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段引出應對流言蜚語的兩種方式:申辯和保持沉默;第二段對比闡述兩種方法各自的理由;第三段表明自己更傾向于哪種方法并說明理由。
Explain or Keep Silence ?
Nowadays , it is very difficult to avoid rumors and slanders completely , espe-cially to those celebrities . Some people maintain that when one suffers from rumors , he should come out to make explanation and defense for himself , while others argue that the best way is to keep silence . As to me , I am if favor of the former in rumors .
Of course , sometimes silence can help reduce peoples interest in rumors . Also , after a period of time , rumors might disappear naturally in the face of the truth . But it is worth noting that in most cases , silence doesnt work in getting rid of rumors but increase peoples uncertainty and suspicion .
From my point of view , facing rumors , one should stand up bravely to defend himself rather than say nothing to them . The following reasons can support my argument . First , it is your explanation that helps others leam the truth . Second , rumors often go round very quickly , and your silence will foster its further spread .
Test 7
框架搭建:由標題和提綱所列內容可知,本文應為一篇圖表闡釋類作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段根據圖表簡要描述近幾年報考研究生人數的變化;第二段說明報考研究生人數生發變化的原因;第三段談談個人對考研熱的看法。
Rush for Postgraduate Study
According to the table , it is clear that there is a sharp increase in number of postgraduate candidates in X Province from 2000 to 2008 . In 2000 , there were only 1,600 candidates participating in the exam . However , 2 years later , the number increased to 5,600 . and by 2008 it has reached 52,000 .
There are many reasons accounting for the great change . Firstly , the tough competition in the job market pressure on the job market , which stimulates many students to turn to further education . Secondly , many students with equivalent education background to college graduates are allowed to apply for postgraduate study . Finally , the society has a greater demand for the postgraduates with the economic development .
As far as I am concerned , dollege students should take full account before deciding to further their education . For one thing , postgraduate study does not neccessarily ensure us a bright future . For another , its tough process to prepare for the exam for postgraduate study and not everyone can stick it out .
Test 8
框架搭建:由標題和提綱所列內容可知,本文應為一篇論證觀點類作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段解釋 早起的鳥兒有蟲吃 這一諺語包含的道理;第二段論證其中的道理;第三段重申該諺語中的道理,提出建議或期望。
Early Bird Catches the Worm
The proverb Early Bird Catches the Worm has been generally accepted . It tells us that if you do something early or before anyone else , you will have an advantage and be successful . The truth of it is self-evident .
There are numerous examples supporting this argument . A case in point is that students usually make two to three years preparation before their overseas study . This is close to suggest an early preparation increases the possibility of success . For another example , DHL , an express company , was the first company in its field to extend its business to China . The proverb Early Bird Catches the Worm words on DHL which now holds a larger market share .
Judging from the evidence offered , we might safely draw the conclusion that the earlier one does something , the more chances one will succeed . But what is worth noting is that we should set a correct goal before our carly preparation . To conclude , we should take the idiom Early Bird Catches the Worm as our guidance in the daily life and work .
Test 1
框架搭建:由標題和提綱所列內容可知,本文應為一篇說明現象類作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段描述大學校園內舉辦 選秀 活動的情況;第二段說明校園 選秀 活動帶來的影響;第三段談談個人對 選秀 活動的看法。
Talent-search Show on Campus
In recent years , there has been a talent-search craze on college campus .Various talent-search shows , like Campus Superstar Competition , Happy Boy , have emerged one after another on campus . Moreover , these activities are almost the copies of those social talent shows from the form to the contents .
As everyone sees , talent shows are bringing great influence on college students . Above all , these activities enrich students after-class life and provide a good stage for students to show themselves . Also , by attending these activities , college students can improve their abilities in social cimmunication . However , talent shows have brought some negative effects . For instance , most activities have monotonous form and lack creativity , which influence to some degree the whole culture atmosphere on campus .
Form my point of view , college students need cultural and amusement activities like talent shows , but the overall quality of these activities should be improved . The activity organizers should increase the activity feature and take full account . With the improvement in quality , I believe , talent shows will go in playing an important role in college students life .
Test 2
框架搭建:由標題和提綱所列內容可知,本文應為一篇對策方法類作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段提出信息安全問題并描述其主要表現;第二段說明信息安全事故可能導致的危害;第三段說明應該如何解決信息安全問題。
Information Security
In recent years , information security has aroused widespread concem . With our stepping into information society , computer crimes keep rising and information security incidents occur frequently . Hackers , fraudsters and serious white-coolar ariminals emerge on the Intemet in an endless stream .
It is very clear that information security incidents are bringing great harm to the victims , including govermment departments , organizations , institutions and individuals . First of all , government may suffer from national security threats . With the help of computers and the Internet , spies and some weak-minded officials can disclose satate secrets via more advanced skills . Furthermore , companies may lose important trade secrets ; the publics and users comfidence will be damaged .
Considering seriousness of the problem , we should pay more attention to infor-mation security . Firstly , technology plays a vital role in solving this problem . Since no system can ever be absolutely safe , both prevention and detection techniques are necessary to information security management . Finally , organizations and companies should promote the awareness on information secunity to its staff . Only in this way can information security be guaranteed .
Test 3
框架搭建:由標題和提綱所列內容可知,本文應為一篇對比分析類作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段簡要介紹網絡文學的出現背景以及網絡文學的做優點;第二段分析網絡文學的缺點;第三段談談信人對網絡文學的看法。
Network Literature
Nowadays with the widespread of Intemet , network literature , as a new literature form , has gained much popularity . Compared with traditional literature , network literature has many advantages . Above all , it is easier to become popular , whether in terms of its form or its contents . In addition , with Intemet as its media , network literature has a stronger expressive force and a quicker spreading .
As every coin has two sides , network literature has also some disadvantages . For one thing , the creation of network literature goes towards fawning on common , of which we can find limited classic ones . For another , the administration and supervision on network literature are still not very sound and effective .
Weighing up the advantages and disadvantages of network literature , I think it is a beneficial supplement to traditional literature . Undoubtedly , Internet , as the media of network literature , provides a wider space for spreading and developing liteerature . But it is worth noting that many network literature works are written in a rough way . Therefore , people should have a good selection when reading literature works on line .
Test 4
框架搭建:由標題和提綱所列內容可知,本文應為一封道歉信,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段說明道歉緣由(沒能參加弟弟的畢業典禮)并向弟弟表達真誠的歉意;第二段詳細解釋沒能參加典禮的原因;第三段再次表達歉意并提出彌補建議。
An Apology Letter
July 5,2011
Dear brother ,
I am excessively sorry that I cant attend your graduation ceremony as I have promised . Now , I am writing you this letter to show my deep regret . Please accept my sincere apology with gratitude . I hope you will understand me and excuse me for my being absent .
I will be very grateful if you are kind enough to listen to my explanation . The reason why I cant attend your graduation ceremony is that I have already been arranged to attend a meeting next week in Nanjing . I have no way out because the things I have to do are of great importance to my company . Therefore , its not in my power to comply with your request .
Naturally , I would like to show my apology in person next month . I shall be obliged if you will kindly write and tell me when and where you will meet me next month . Once again , I would like to express my sincere apology for any inconvenience caused . Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation .
Sincerely Yours ,
Liu Yuan
Test 5
框架搭建:由標題和提綱所列內容可知,本文應為敘事類作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段描述吵架的背景,引出吵架當天的情景;第二段具體敘述吵架的原因、經過及結果;第三段談談個人感受以及從這次吵架中吸取的教訓。
A Quarrel in the Dormitory
Weeks ago , I witnessed a quarrel between my two roommates . It shocked me that two good friends fell out just for a very trifling matter .
I was in the morning at a weekend , when I was washing my face in the bathroom . Suddenly I heard Xu Lan and Wu Xin shouting at each other . I hurried to come out to see what happened . It turned out the noise of Wu Xins closing the door waked Xu Lan . Xu Lan thought Wu Xin deliberately closed the door heavily . Wu Xin didnt admit her fault . So they had a bitter quarrel . Though later they stopped quarreling under our persuasion , neither of them would like to apologize .
Such a quarrel leaves me to think a lot about dormitory harmony . If either Xu Lan or Wu Xin can be a littel tolerant or take a better way to express herself , this quarrel , I think , can be avoided easily . It is no doubt that a harmonious dormitory life benefits all the members , but it meeds our common efforts to build it .
Test 6
框架搭建:由標題和提綱所列內容可知,本文應為一篇對比分析類作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段引出應對流言蜚語的兩種方式:申辯和保持沉默;第二段對比闡述兩種方法各自的理由;第三段表明自己更傾向于哪種方法并說明理由。
Explain or Keep Silence ?
Nowadays , it is very difficult to avoid rumors and slanders completely , espe-cially to those celebrities . Some people maintain that when one suffers from rumors , he should come out to make explanation and defense for himself , while others argue that the best way is to keep silence . As to me , I am if favor of the former in rumors .
Of course , sometimes silence can help reduce peoples interest in rumors . Also , after a period of time , rumors might disappear naturally in the face of the truth . But it is worth noting that in most cases , silence doesnt work in getting rid of rumors but increase peoples uncertainty and suspicion .
From my point of view , facing rumors , one should stand up bravely to defend himself rather than say nothing to them . The following reasons can support my argument . First , it is your explanation that helps others leam the truth . Second , rumors often go round very quickly , and your silence will foster its further spread .
Test 7
框架搭建:由標題和提綱所列內容可知,本文應為一篇圖表闡釋類作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段根據圖表簡要描述近幾年報考研究生人數的變化;第二段說明報考研究生人數生發變化的原因;第三段談談個人對考研熱的看法。
Rush for Postgraduate Study
According to the table , it is clear that there is a sharp increase in number of postgraduate candidates in X Province from 2000 to 2008 . In 2000 , there were only 1,600 candidates participating in the exam . However , 2 years later , the number increased to 5,600 . and by 2008 it has reached 52,000 .
There are many reasons accounting for the great change . Firstly , the tough competition in the job market pressure on the job market , which stimulates many students to turn to further education . Secondly , many students with equivalent education background to college graduates are allowed to apply for postgraduate study . Finally , the society has a greater demand for the postgraduates with the economic development .
As far as I am concerned , dollege students should take full account before deciding to further their education . For one thing , postgraduate study does not neccessarily ensure us a bright future . For another , its tough process to prepare for the exam for postgraduate study and not everyone can stick it out .
Test 8
框架搭建:由標題和提綱所列內容可知,本文應為一篇論證觀點類作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段解釋 早起的鳥兒有蟲吃 這一諺語包含的道理;第二段論證其中的道理;第三段重申該諺語中的道理,提出建議或期望。
Early Bird Catches the Worm
The proverb Early Bird Catches the Worm has been generally accepted . It tells us that if you do something early or before anyone else , you will have an advantage and be successful . The truth of it is self-evident .
There are numerous examples supporting this argument . A case in point is that students usually make two to three years preparation before their overseas study . This is close to suggest an early preparation increases the possibility of success . For another example , DHL , an express company , was the first company in its field to extend its business to China . The proverb Early Bird Catches the Worm words on DHL which now holds a larger market share .
Judging from the evidence offered , we might safely draw the conclusion that the earlier one does something , the more chances one will succeed . But what is worth noting is that we should set a correct goal before our carly preparation . To conclude , we should take the idiom Early Bird Catches the Worm as our guidance in the daily life and work .