· 英語 路漫漫其修遠(yuǎn)兮 吾將上下而求索 高考二輪總復(fù)習(xí) 第一部分 微專題強(qiáng)化練 七　書面表達(dá) 第一部分 3　(半)開放式作文 考 向 分 析 考 題 引 路 強(qiáng) 化 訓(xùn) 練 2 3 1 易 錯(cuò) 防 范 4 考 向 分 析 年份 體裁 話題 命題形式 命題趨勢 2024湖北 夾敘夾議文 質(zhì)疑促進(jìn)學(xué)習(xí) 半開放 命題角度從考生日常的生活學(xué)習(xí)逐漸轉(zhuǎn)變到思想層面。要求更高，形式更靈活。 2024浙江 議論文 與同學(xué)有不同 觀點(diǎn)時(shí)選擇 半開放 考 題 引 路 Writing 1 (2024·福建) 如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面的引語(quotation)，按要求用英語寫一篇短文。 “Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm.” —Sir Winston，Churchill 內(nèi)容要求： 1．你對(duì)該引語的理解； 2．你的相關(guān)經(jīng)歷； 3．恰當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾。 注意： 1．短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 2．文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息； 3．詞數(shù)：120左右。 This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that_________ __________________________________________________ 立意與點(diǎn)撥： 項(xiàng)目 內(nèi)容 “三定” 體裁：議論文　時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)(講述個(gè)人經(jīng)歷)　人稱：第一人稱 確定結(jié)構(gòu) 三段論：闡釋名言→事例論證→得出結(jié)論 確定要點(diǎn) ①名言含義：面對(duì)失敗，我們不應(yīng)該泄氣，而是應(yīng)該鼓足勇氣，充滿熱情地繼續(xù)堅(jiān)持下去 ②個(gè)人經(jīng)歷：學(xué)習(xí)騎自行車的例子 ③名言啟迪：如果我們不嘗試，我們就不可能成功，最重要的是學(xué)會(huì)堅(jiān)持 答案： This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn't get discouraged right after failures.Rather，we should keep trying with enthusiasm.Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures. At the age of twelve，I got a nice bike as a birthday gift.So excited was I that I couldn't wait to try my hand at riding it.However，it was harder than expected.The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control.Worse still，I took many falls off the bike.I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going.With more practice，I did better and better.Looking back，I feel had I lost heart I wouldn't be able to ride a bike. Actually，we can't succeed in everything we try.What's important is that we should stick at it. Writing 2 (2024·浙江) 在班級(jí)活動(dòng)中，當(dāng)你的想法與大多數(shù)同學(xué)不一致時(shí)，你是堅(jiān)持自己的觀點(diǎn)并說服別人，還是尊重大多數(shù)同學(xué)的意見？請(qǐng)你以“When I Have a Different Opinion”為題，用英語寫一篇100～120個(gè)詞的短文。要求如下： 1．從以上兩種做法中選擇一種； 2．以具體事例闡述你選擇的理由。 注意：短文中，不得以任何形式透露地區(qū)、學(xué)校、同學(xué)姓名等真實(shí)信息。否則，按考試作弊行為認(rèn)定。 When I Have a Different Opinion __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ 立意與點(diǎn)撥： 項(xiàng)目 內(nèi)容 “三定” 體裁：議論文　時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)(講述個(gè)人經(jīng)歷)　人稱：第一人稱 確定結(jié)構(gòu) 三段論：作出選擇→舉例證明→重申選擇 確定要點(diǎn) ①選擇一種作法 ②對(duì)應(yīng)個(gè)人經(jīng)歷 ③重申選擇 答案： One possible student version： When I Have a Different Opinion

　　We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to deal with such a situation. When I have a better idea，I would choose to stick to it. By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly.

　　Once we were discussing where to go for an outing. Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nicer place. I managed to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea. We did have a good time that day. Good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all.

　　An alternative student version： When I Have a Different Opinion

　　We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. When I have a different opinion, I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority.

　　The main reason for my choice is that being brought up in a culture emphasizing collectivism, I tend to sacrifice my own interest for the group benefit. Once we were left to decide whether to have a picnic in a park or go to a museum. I would love to go to a museum, but most of my classmates wanted to go for a picnic. Without hesitation, I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that day. Sometimes giving up a little can mean getting more. 強(qiáng) 化 訓(xùn) 練 （點(diǎn)此鏈接） 易 錯(cuò) 防 范 審題急促，主次不分 根據(jù)下面的提示，用英語寫一篇120詞左右的短文。 (1)眼睛是心靈的窗口。 (2)學(xué)會(huì)如何保護(hù)眼睛。 __________________________________________________ 易錯(cuò)分析：學(xué)生由于急于答題，所以往往審題不認(rèn)真，極易把寫作重點(diǎn)放在眼睛的重要性上。 答案： People often say, “Eyes are the windows of soul”. All of us understand the importance of the eyes. But how to protect eyesight still remains a question among us students. If you want to take care of your eyesight, you must pay attention to the following points. Firstly, you should not use your eyes continuously for long periods. After you have read for a long time, about two hours or so, you take a rest by looking atsomething more distant. Secondly, you should keep your book about a foot away from your eyes when you read it.

　　You should also keep in mind: “Don't read in a dim light or in the sun; don't read in a moving bus or in bed.” Doing eye exercises regularly will help you keep good eyesight. If you fail to keep these rules, you will become short-sighted sooner or later. 解析：從題目的要求看，本篇作文要求寫成說明文。重點(diǎn)要放在如何保護(hù)眼睛上。例如：不要看書時(shí)間太長，眼睛與書的距離要適當(dāng)，走路坐車時(shí)不要看書，要常做眼保健操等。如何保護(hù)眼睛這個(gè)問題比較好寫，因?yàn)榭忌羞@方面的知識(shí)和體驗(yàn)。開放式作文的答題思路與漢語作文非常相像。首先要明確主題，然后根據(jù)主題搭建文章的主體結(jié)構(gòu)，即寫作提綱，接著進(jìn)行文章血肉的填充。在擬寫作提綱時(shí)，要突出主題，有層次，先寫什么，后寫什么，要層次分明。

　　· 英語 路漫漫其修遠(yuǎn)兮 吾將上下而求索 高考二輪總復(fù)習(xí) 第一部分 微專題強(qiáng)化練 七　書面表達(dá) 第一部分 3　(半)開放式作文 考 向 分 析 考 題 引 路 強(qiáng) 化 訓(xùn) 練 2 3 1 易 錯(cuò) 防 范 4 考 向 分 析 年份 體裁 話題 命題形式 命題趨勢 2024湖北 夾敘夾議文 質(zhì)疑促進(jìn)學(xué)習(xí) 半開放 命題角度從考生日常的生活學(xué)習(xí)逐漸轉(zhuǎn)變到思想層面。要求更高，形式更靈活。 2024浙江 議論文 與同學(xué)有不同 觀點(diǎn)時(shí)選擇 半開放 考 題 引 路 Writing 1 (2024·福建) 如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面的引語(quotation)，按要求用英語寫一篇短文。 “Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm.” —Sir Winston，Churchill 內(nèi)容要求： 1．你對(duì)該引語的理解； 2．你的相關(guān)經(jīng)歷； 3．恰當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾。 注意： 1．短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 2．文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息； 3．詞數(shù)：120左右。 This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that_________ __________________________________________________ 立意與點(diǎn)撥： 項(xiàng)目 內(nèi)容 “三定” 體裁：議論文　時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)(講述個(gè)人經(jīng)歷)　人稱：第一人稱 確定結(jié)構(gòu) 三段論：闡釋名言→事例論證→得出結(jié)論 確定要點(diǎn) ①名言含義：面對(duì)失敗，我們不應(yīng)該泄氣，而是應(yīng)該鼓足勇氣，充滿熱情地繼續(xù)堅(jiān)持下去 ②個(gè)人經(jīng)歷：學(xué)習(xí)騎自行車的例子 ③名言啟迪：如果我們不嘗試，我們就不可能成功，最重要的是學(xué)會(huì)堅(jiān)持 答案： This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn't get discouraged right after failures.Rather，we should keep trying with enthusiasm.Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures. At the age of twelve，I got a nice bike as a birthday gift.So excited was I that I couldn't wait to try my hand at riding it.However，it was harder than expected.The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control.Worse still，I took many falls off the bike.I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going.With more practice，I did better and better.Looking back，I feel had I lost heart I wouldn't be able to ride a bike. Actually，we can't succeed in everything we try.What's important is that we should stick at it. Writing 2 (2024·浙江) 在班級(jí)活動(dòng)中，當(dāng)你的想法與大多數(shù)同學(xué)不一致時(shí)，你是堅(jiān)持自己的觀點(diǎn)并說服別人，還是尊重大多數(shù)同學(xué)的意見？請(qǐng)你以“When I Have a Different Opinion”為題，用英語寫一篇100～120個(gè)詞的短文。要求如下： 1．從以上兩種做法中選擇一種； 2．以具體事例闡述你選擇的理由。 注意：短文中，不得以任何形式透露地區(qū)、學(xué)校、同學(xué)姓名等真實(shí)信息。否則，按考試作弊行為認(rèn)定。 When I Have a Different Opinion __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ 立意與點(diǎn)撥： 項(xiàng)目 內(nèi)容 “三定” 體裁：議論文　時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)(講述個(gè)人經(jīng)歷)　人稱：第一人稱 確定結(jié)構(gòu) 三段論：作出選擇→舉例證明→重申選擇 確定要點(diǎn) ①選擇一種作法 ②對(duì)應(yīng)個(gè)人經(jīng)歷 ③重申選擇 答案： One possible student version： When I Have a Different Opinion

　　We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to deal with such a situation. When I have a better idea，I would choose to stick to it. By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly.

　　Once we were discussing where to go for an outing. Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nicer place. I managed to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea. We did have a good time that day. Good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all.

　　An alternative student version： When I Have a Different Opinion

　　We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. When I have a different opinion, I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority.

　　The main reason for my choice is that being brought up in a culture emphasizing collectivism, I tend to sacrifice my own interest for the group benefit. Once we were left to decide whether to have a picnic in a park or go to a museum. I would love to go to a museum, but most of my classmates wanted to go for a picnic. Without hesitation, I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that day. Sometimes giving up a little can mean getting more. 強(qiáng) 化 訓(xùn) 練 （點(diǎn)此鏈接） 易 錯(cuò) 防 范 審題急促，主次不分 根據(jù)下面的提示，用英語寫一篇120詞左右的短文。 (1)眼睛是心靈的窗口。 (2)學(xué)會(huì)如何保護(hù)眼睛。 __________________________________________________ 易錯(cuò)分析：學(xué)生由于急于答題，所以往往審題不認(rèn)真，極易把寫作重點(diǎn)放在眼睛的重要性上。 答案： People often say, “Eyes are the windows of soul”. All of us understand the importance of the eyes. But how to protect eyesight still remains a question among us students. If you want to take care of your eyesight, you must pay attention to the following points. Firstly, you should not use your eyes continuously for long periods. After you have read for a long time, about two hours or so, you take a rest by looking atsomething more distant. Secondly, you should keep your book about a foot away from your eyes when you read it.

　　You should also keep in mind: “Don't read in a dim light or in the sun; don't read in a moving bus or in bed.” Doing eye exercises regularly will help you keep good eyesight. If you fail to keep these rules, you will become short-sighted sooner or later. 解析：從題目的要求看，本篇作文要求寫成說明文。重點(diǎn)要放在如何保護(hù)眼睛上。例如：不要看書時(shí)間太長，眼睛與書的距離要適當(dāng)，走路坐車時(shí)不要看書，要常做眼保健操等。如何保護(hù)眼睛這個(gè)問題比較好寫，因?yàn)榭忌羞@方面的知識(shí)和體驗(yàn)。開放式作文的答題思路與漢語作文非常相像。首先要明確主題，然后根據(jù)主題搭建文章的主體結(jié)構(gòu)，即寫作提綱，接著進(jìn)行文章血肉的填充。在擬寫作提綱時(shí)，要突出主題，有層次，先寫什么，后寫什么，要層次分明。