2024年高考英語考前沖刺書面表達命題預(yù)測

高考英語寫作，即根據(jù)提示進行書面表達，有效的組織自己的思想，自己的邏輯，正確地運用語文載體，連貫地傳遞信息，表達意思，有效運用所學(xué)語言知識。

高考英語書面表達是英語考試的重頭戲之一，而且非常適合考前集中突破。高考英語作文題目的命題歷來是“情理之中，意料之外”。“情理之中”即高考英語寫作皆是“學(xué)生話題、現(xiàn)實生活、熱點焦點話題”；“意料之外”則指高考英語作文題目經(jīng)常與考生直接關(guān)心的社會熱點話題無直接聯(lián)系，但仔細琢磨，又會發(fā)現(xiàn)一些聯(lián)系，就是說“熱點歸熱點，關(guān)鍵找角度”。

注意：

1）要把原文的內(nèi)容表達的清楚，順暢

2） 字?jǐn)?shù)一定要達到要求

3）符合出題者的要求

4）復(fù)合句、高級詞匯的使用。

要求考生必須把以下范文背誦并默寫過，高考時則可根據(jù)實際進行套用，大腦提取信息，信手拈來高分！

預(yù)測一：

面對高考，父母孩子們都有著沉重的壓力。請仔細觀察下面漫畫，寫一篇短文。要求：

1．描述漫畫內(nèi)容，如情景、人物、動作等等；

2．著重描述漫畫所表達的現(xiàn)象以及你的看法。

注意：

1. 可參照圖中文字及下面文章開頭所給提示，作必要的發(fā)揮想象。

2．詞數(shù)150左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

3. 作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意行文連貫。

預(yù)測二：

（一）

人情冷暖，何至于此？10月13日下午5時30分許，一出慘劇 (tragedy) 發(fā)生在廣東佛山：年僅兩歲的女童小悅悅先后三次被車碾過。而讓人難以理解的是，七分鐘內(nèi)從女童身邊經(jīng)過的十八個路人，竟然對此不聞不問。最后，一位撿垃圾的阿姨把小悅悅抱到路邊并找到她的媽媽。經(jīng)醫(yī)院搶救無效，最終離世。根據(jù)這則資訊，用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文，對司機和路人的冷漠（indifference）加以簡要的評論。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

【參考范文】

Recently, a tragedy happened in Foshan, Guangdong Province. A two-year-old girl was run over by two buses for three times and the two drivers left directly. What’s worse, while the girl was lying in the street bleeding and crying in pain, 18 people passed by but nobody stopped to do anything to save the girl. At the news, I think both the drivers and those passers by are to blame for their selfishness and indifference, whatever reasons they can give. In life, every one can meet trouble and need help, in which case all the other people should spare no efforts. So, here, I just call on the whole society to love and help each other. If we cannot defeat indifference, perhaps, one day, we will get ourselves killed by it.

（二）

假設(shè)你叫李明，下面是你的一位外國筆友Kristie給你寫的電子郵件，詢問有關(guān)小悅悅事件的情況。

Dear Li Ming,

I learned from a news flash that a two-year-old girl was ignored by more than a dozen passers-by after being run over twice in a south China town．I’m very shocked．I used to think the Chinese were hardworking and kindhearted, and they really were when I was on a visit in China two years ago．So I doubt whether it was true news．Can you tell me what you learned about this incident?

Sincerely yours,Kristie

請你給她回一封郵件，要點如下：

1．社會陷入自責(zé)和反思；

2．某些路人的冷漠或許另有原因，可最終還是有一名拾荒阿姨挺身而出；

3．單個事件不能代表中國，助人為樂一直是中國的傳統(tǒng)美德。

注意：

1．不能照抄原信件語句；

2．可自由發(fā)揮添加細節(jié)；

3．詞數(shù)100左右；

4．回信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。 參考詞匯：倫理道德ethical and moral （adj．）;

美德virtue （n．）

【參考范文】

Dear Kristie,

I was in very low spirits when hearing this shocking news, and so was the whole nation．All the people have been undertaking a thoughtful review of the ethical and moral challenges we are faced with．While we blame those hardhearted passers-by, there might be deep reasons behind the scenes．For various reasons there is a growing tendency for people to keep away from being involved in such accidents．However, on no account shall we tolerate this heartless behavior．Luckily in the story you mentioned, an old lady, who earned her life by collecting rubbish, came to the little girl’s aid and helped rush her to hospital．So we have every reason to believe that the Chinese traditional virtues of being ready to help others will remain forever．

Sincerely yours,

Li Ming

預(yù)測三：

假設(shè)你叫李華，是校報通訊員。上周三你班召開了一次班會，會上重點討論“老人摔倒要不要扶起”這一話題，原因是近幾年發(fā)生過多起因扶起摔倒老人而引火燒身的官司。你班同學(xué)對此進行了激烈辯論，請你結(jié)合辯論情況，用英語為校報寫一篇報道，并發(fā)表自己的看法。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右。

2.可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫。

3.開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

4.參考詞匯

官司：lawsuit

【參考范文】

A class meeting was held in our class last Wednesday. At the meeting we classmates had a heated debate on “whether we should help the old people up when they fall over.”

Some classmates think we have responsibility to help them, because we Chinese have fine traditions to help people in trouble. While others have quite different opinions. They think we should leave a distance off and help to call 120, because in recent years many lawsuits have happened due to helping the old people. The helpers had to pay the injured a lot of money.

In my opinion, when we help the old people, we should depend on specific situation. When the old person is in great danger and badly needs help, we should give an immediate first aid and help to send him or her to the nearest hospital. When the old person is slightly injured, we’d better help to call the police.

預(yù)測四：

近年來，由食品衛(wèi)生安全引發(fā)的問題在校園內(nèi)外時有發(fā)生。你校上周就發(fā)生了一次食物中毒事件，兩名學(xué)生在校外吃了一種油炸食品而引起胃痛。請你以李華的名義用英文給學(xué)校英語報社編輯寫一封信，談?wù)勀銓@一現(xiàn)象的看法。詞數(shù)：100左右。內(nèi)容必須包括：

1.有些商家只顧賺錢，無視人們的健康和安全；

2.學(xué)生應(yīng)盡量在校園內(nèi)吃飯，不要到校外亂吃；

3.為了防止類似事件發(fā)生， 提出你的建議。

【參考范文】

Dear editor,

Last week, two students of our school suffered from stomachache because they ate some poisonous fried food outside campus. Nowadays in our country, some business people care little about people’s health and safety as long as they can make money. Some even sell polluted or poisonous food to consumers and this often leads to serious health problems. In order to prevent such tragedy happening again, we students should try to avoid buying food from the stores or stalls out of the school, and have meals in school dining rooms. Only in this way can we protect ourselves. Besides, the local government and the school should take practical measures to ensure students’ health and life security. I’m expecting your advice and ideas.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

預(yù)測五：

假如你叫李華，是一位高中生。隨著科技的發(fā)展，iPod已成為中學(xué)生的新寵。用iPod既可聽音樂、閱讀純文本電子書，又可玩電子游戲。請你用英語給某英語報社寫一封信，談?wù)勚袑W(xué)生使用iPod的情況。信的內(nèi)容須包括以下幾點：

1.使用iPod對學(xué)習(xí)的好處。

2.對課堂紀(jì)律和學(xué)習(xí)可能產(chǎn)生的負面影響。

3.提出自己的建議并說明理由。

注意：1.開頭、結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.詞數(shù)100左右。

【參考范文】

Dear Editor,

I’m a senior high school student named Li Hua.Now many students have iPods and think it’s a fashion to use them.Using an iPod,we can listen to music,download a lot of learning materials and read them on the screen.Some students,however,bring their iPods to classroom and listen to music with earphones,which makes the teacher and other students greatly annoyed.What’s worse,some of them even waste precious time in class playing video games.In my opinion,as a student,we should make good use of iPod to help achieve academic success.Classroom is a place for students to study,and therefore,the school should make a rule to guide the students to use iPods in a proper way.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

預(yù)測六：

近年微博（microblog）在中國越來越流行，2011年也被有關(guān)媒體稱為“微博元年”。假設(shè)你是校報記者，請根據(jù)下列提示為校報寫一篇介紹微博的英語短文。

1.非常方便，人們可以隨時利用微博來表達心聲，交流想法；

2.給人們提供了一種釋放壓力的方式；

3.與朋友分享心情，增進他們之間的了解；

4.也有潛在的危險，有可能泄露個人隱私或其他重要信息；

5.綜上所述，使用微博要謹(jǐn)慎。

詞數(shù)：100左右（已給部分不計入總詞數(shù)）

【參考范文】

Microblog has become part of our life. It is very convenient for people to express their feelings instantly at any time. Besides, it provides a chance for people to release their inner stress. By showing their heartfelt emotions on the microblog, their friends may also know about their condition and can offer timely comfort. However, microblog can also be potentially dangerous as it may give away people’s privacy and other significant information. All in all, microblog provides us with some concerns as well as comfort and large quantities of information, so we should be careful while using it.

預(yù)測七：

法國哲學(xué)家盧梭說過：“No Thanksgiving would be no virtue.”（沒有感恩就沒有真正的美德。）如今社會上一些人缺乏感恩之心，少數(shù)人甚至在父母年老體弱時都不愿意贍養(yǎng)。

請你結(jié)合自己的實際，談幾點父母值得你感恩的地方，以及將來你會做些什么來報答父母的養(yǎng)育之恩。

注意：1．短文的開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。

2．100詞左右。（感恩:thanksgiving）

【參考范文】

Not only do our parents give us life, but they also give us endless love and support, always sharing our happiness and sorrow. I’m very grateful to my parents. They give me so much love and spare no efforts to support me. I still remember once I was seriously ill, they were so worried and almost kept me company the whole night. Now I’m in Senior 3.Luckily for me, my parents can understand my stressful condition and often communicate with me with encouraging words. Furthermore, they give me enough personal space, which I appreciate so much. What I should do now is to study hard. When I grow up, I will try my best to make my parents live a happy life.

預(yù)測八：

中國“虎媽”蔡美兒以其給兩個女兒列出絕對不允許做的“十不準(zhǔn)”在全球一炮走紅。由此而引發(fā)的有關(guān)如何教育子女的爭論愈演愈烈。請就此給China Daily投稿，闡明家長們的不同觀點，并發(fā)表自己的見解。

一些家長的觀點

子女必須沿著父母為其選擇的道路努力……

必要時采用高壓手段……

另一些家長的觀點 孩子應(yīng)該自由發(fā)展……賞識教育，好孩子是夸出來的……

你的觀點

……（至少兩點）

注意：

1.對所給要點逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。

2.詞數(shù)100左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

3.作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。

【參考范文】

Amy Chua, a professor at Yale Law School, who listed ten “Don’ts” to her two daughters became famous overnight．She insists that parents should be very strict with their children． It has caused a heated online debate．Some parents insist that children should make every effort to live up to their parents’ expectations．They believe it is necessary to be strict with their children．They say parents who set high standards and push their kids to study and make achievements can ensure their children’s success in the future competition． Others, on the contrary, hold the opinion that children should have the right to make their own decisions and develop in their own way．Additionally, praise the children when they do well and encourage them when they are faced with challenges, and they will be great． In my opinion, those who are raised with the strict Chinese parenting style don’t have the ability to think and act independently.They lack imagination, creativity and social skills．Parents should not put so much pressure on the children．Just give them suggestions and show respect to their own choices so that they will learn to be independent．預(yù)測九：

校車安全條例(草案征求意見稿)》【參考范文】

Legal Affairs Office of the State Council of China publicized the exposure draft of School Bus Safety Regulations on Dec. 11th, 2011 to collect public opinions. During the past year, there have been several severe school bus accidents which claimed many young lives. These tragedies came as a shock to everyone, and they have aroused great concern among people from all walks of life. The publication of the draft regulations indicates that our government has realized how serious the situation is and that it is taking effective measures to ensure the safety of the school bus.

In my opinion, the draft regulations reflect a deep concern from our government as well as from the public about students’ lives. When put into effect, the regulations will surely help reduce the number of accidents and benefit schools and families as well. Also, they will be of vital importance in stabilizing the society.

（二）

近年來中小學(xué)及幼兒園校車的交通事故時有發(fā)生，在社會上造成了非常不好的影響。重慶市政府決定統(tǒng)一配置中小學(xué)校、幼兒園校車，校車設(shè)置統(tǒng)一的識別顏色、圖案。

假定你是李華，請就此寫一封郵件給在美國的筆友Jack，

介紹這一情況。要點如下：

1．背景介紹；

2．描述校車；

3．校車好處；

4．詢問美國校車管理經(jīng)驗。

字?jǐn)?shù)：100左右。

【參考范文】

Dear Jack,

How is everything? In the past few years in China, terrible accidents have happened to school buses, causing much attention as well as worries. Recently our government decided to provide buses for schools and kindergartens. The new school buses have the same color and mark. The new school bus has a big nose, which is quite different from an ordinary bus. It has better safety equipment. It will be less crowded and run on time. The bus driver will be more experienced. The police will have more stricter rules. Safety will be certainly guaranteed. By the way how does a school bus run in the United States? Could you tell me something about American school buses?

Best wishes!

Yours ever,

Li Hua

預(yù)測十：

公安部發(fā)布了《關(guān)于處罰醉酒駕駛的征求意見稿》，提出搭乘醉酒司機車的乘客也應(yīng)該受到懲罰。此事引起了社會的廣泛關(guān)注與熱議。請根據(jù)下表提供的信息，以“Should passengers be responsible for drunk drivers?”為題寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文。(開頭已給出)

正方:1.乘客的搭乘等于縱容酒后駕駛

2.對司機和自己的生命都不負責(zé)對乘客不公平