2024年高考英語高效書面表達專題卷:28(含解析)
1.
人們完成工作的方式通常有兩種:獨立完成與合作完成。兩種方式各有特點。請你以此為題,按照以下要點寫一篇英語短文。
獨立完成:自行安排,自己解決問題:
合作完成:一起討論,相互學習:
我喜歡的方式及理由:
寫作要求:
必須使用5個句子表達全部所給內容:
將5個句子組成連貫的短文:
開頭已經給出但不計入總詞數:
There are basically two ways to get work done. One is to work individually. 。。。
2.閱讀下面的短文,然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
The Nigerian postal service has witnessed a reduction in the number of letters sent, especially by individuals, due to the alternatives of email and text.
“People prefer these over letters, because of the speed, although letters serve many purposes, other than conveying of messages", said Barry Varley Tipton, principal of Cherry Field College.
But some people think that the vanishing(逐漸消失的) art of letter writing has grave (嚴重的) consequences for students, teachers, the economy, society and the beauty of reading from loved ones, because letters in those days usually had a variety of styles .
A lover of letters writing, Hajiya Aisha refers to the occasions she has seen people enraged, because their connections at a cyber cafe took 56 seconds rather than the usual 36 hours. She says, “Although letters are slow, waiting for something good is not wholly a bad thing. Nothing beats a hand written letter.”
"When I was a graduate studying overseas twenty five years ago, my mother wrote to me daily. It was wonderful to receive those letters. They often said nothing more than everyone was thinking of me. I continue this tradition with several friends who are scattered worldwide. Hand written letters show the love that we have for family and friends. Email cannot replace the smile of actually getting the letter. The warm, sincere thank- you note, or the sweetly scented love letter we usually received and sent in those days is irreplaceable" she said.
Will electronic age stamps replace letters? Hopefully not, since it takes with it a culture rich in colour, history, and communication. Letters, like bits of ourselves, deserve to be stored away for future readers, giving them insight into details as small as the price and pattern of stamps, and as great as personal insights exchanged long ago.
【寫作內容】
1. 以約30詞概括以上短文的主要內容:
2. 然后以約120個詞以“Will written letters die out ?”為主題寫一篇短文,并包括如下要點:
(1)有些人認為用手機收發短信和用因特網收發郵件更加方便快捷,寫信很費時間
(2)有些人喜歡和朋友或家人寫信
(3)你的觀點
【寫作要求】
1. 你可以使用實例或其他論述方法支持你的論點,也可以參照閱讀材料的內容,但不得直接引用閱讀材料中的句子
2. 作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱
【評分標準】
概括準確、語言規范、內容合適,篇章連貫。
(請在答題紙上作答)
3.最近,你校成立了一個心理咨詢室,取名為“心靈的港灣(Harbor For Your Soul)”。該咨詢室配有一名心理咨詢師,旨在為全校學生提供專業的心理咨詢服務。請你根據以下提示,為校英語墻報寫一篇120詞左右的報道。
名稱 心靈的港灣(Harbor For Your Soul)
成立時間 上周三
地點 圖書樓2樓
開放時間 每周一、二、四下午5:00-6:00
原因 目前高中生的學習負擔越來越重,心理問題日益突出
目的 提供心理指導,緩解心理壓力,促進身心健康發展
你的看法 ?
參考詞匯:psychological counseling room
心理咨詢室
psychologist 心理咨詢師
4.請根據以下提示,用英語寫一篇短文。
Hold fast to dreams, for if dreams die, life is a broken-winged bird that can never fly.
注意:1. 無須寫標題,不得照抄英語提示語;
2. 除詩歌外,文體不限;
3. 文中不得透露個人姓名和班級名稱;
4. 詞數為120左右。
你校學生會準備辦一期英語墻報,主題為:保護環境從我做起。請你根據下圖所示寫一篇英語短文。
disposable chopsticks
注意:1.詞數100個左右,開頭語已為你寫好;
2.可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
What Can I Do for Our Environment?
Everyone can do something for our environment.
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________
參考答案
1.
There are basically two ways to get work done. One is to work individually. In this way, people can decide for themselves when to start work and how to do it. What’s more, they will be able to learn how to solve problems on their own.
People may also choose to work in a team, where they can learn from each other and help each other. Besides, they may work out better ways to get work done by discussion.
Personally, I prefer to work in a team, which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and to share my experiences with them
【解析】
2.
Thanks to email and text, people nowadays make their communication quick and convenient, and fewer and fewer letters are written. However, it is still believed that written letters are irreplaceable.
It’s true that many people find it easy to send emails and text messages and often avoid writing letters completely. However, I don’t agree that written letters will gradually disappear.
First of all, it seems to me that letters written by people include a piece of soul and letters are a reflection of human emotions. For instance, using the Internet my sister still likes to receive ordinary letters by post, because they help her to feel a close bond with people living far away.
Secondly, for many years the written word was one of the most powerful tools in the world. Moreover, for many people, to write a letter is an element of their traditions. In many cases the Internet is not considered to be substitute for letters.
In conclusion, letters will never become extinct because of their importance to many generations of people.
Possible version II
Thanks to email and text, people nowadays make their communication quick and convenient, and fewer and fewer letters are written. However, it is still believed that written letters are irreplaceable.
There is no doubt that with the help of the Internet and cell phones, people find it easy and convenient to communicate with others. Compared with them, writing letters seems to be a waste of time.
On the other hand, however, some people do enjoy receiving letters from friends and families, and meanwhile, they prefer to write letters to keep in touch with them rather than send them emails or text them messages.
As far as I am concerned, letters written by people will never disappear. Firstly, it seems to me that they include a piece of soul and letters are a reflection of human emotions. Secondly, for many years the written word was one of the most powerful tools in the world. Moreover, for many people, to write a letter is an element of their traditions. In many cases the Internet is not considered to replace letters.
In conclusion, letters will never become extinct because of their importance to many generations of people.
【解析】略
3.With more and more students feeling stressed out, a psychological counseling room, named “Harbor For Your Soul” was opened in our school last Wednesday. It is on the second floor of the Library Building, open from 5:00 pm to 6:00 pm every Monday, Tuesday and Thursday afternoon.
A psychologist is on duty at the room and he will provide psychological guidance for students and help resolve their mental health issues and concerns.
As its name suggests, “Harbor For Your Soul” will become a place of peace for our souls.
There is no doubt that it will play an important role in our students’ healthy development, both physically and psychologically.
【解析】
試題分析:考查表格類作文的寫作。介紹學校心理咨詢室根據用英語寫一份報告There is no doubt that it will play an important role in our students’ healthy development, both physically and psychologically.用的就是同位語從句和固定句式,還要用適當的關聯詞把句與句連起來,如:for one thing,for another thing;what’s more等
4.
The meaning of life lies in holding fast to dreams. But the changing world seems telling me that people gradually get their dreams lost somehow in the process of growing up, and sometimes I personally find myself saying goodbye unconsciously to those distant childhood dreams.
However, we need dreams. They keep us going; they represent possibility even when we are dragged down by reality. Most successful people are dreams as well as ordinary people who are not afraid to think big and dare to be great. When we were little kids, we all dreamed of doing something big, something significant. Now what we need to do is to keep to them. However, the toughest part is that we often have no idea how to act out all your fantasies. Well, just start with concrete goals and stick to it. Don’t let the nameless fear confuse the eye and defeat our strong belief of future. Through our talents, through our intelligence, through our efforts and through our creativity, we will make it.
Hold fast to dreams, for when dreams go, life is a barren field frozen with snow. So my dear friends, think of your old and maybe dead dreams. Whatever it is, pick it up and make it alive from today.
【解析】
試題分析:考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個話題,并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高,要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時,首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型,在你的能力范圍之內,選擇句式時要賦予變化,因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞,把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體,如besides, further, last but not least等。在發表個人觀點的時候,可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮點說明】文章使用了很好的短語和句子:lie in 在于, in the process of 在…過程中,dreamed of夢想,stick to堅持,make it成功, Most successful people are dreams as well as ordinary people who are not afraid to think big and dare to be great. 這句話用了定語從句, Now what we need to do is to keep to them. 這句話用了主語從句,However, the toughest part is that we often have no idea how to act out all your fantasies. 這句話用了表語從句, Whatever it is, pick it up and make it alive from today.這句話用了讓步狀語從句??傊?,范文使用大量高中教材中出現的高級短語和句型,考生應該能做到學以致用。
考點:考查開放式作文
5.What Can I Do for Our Environment?
Everyone can do something for our environment.
For me, I should try to save electricity in my daily life. For example,if I am the last person to leave the classroom in the evening,I will always remember to turn off the lights. In order to protect our forests,I will use paper wisely. I should try to use both sides of paper whenever it is possible. I will not use things like paper cups and disposable chopsticks because they are made of wood.
I believe that doing all these small things will improve our environment and help make our world a better place to live in.
【解析】
試題分析:這是一篇看圖寫作,做題時:1. 認真讀圖,2. 初步構思,考慮用詞、短語、句型和時態。3. 連詞成句,然后再連句成文。盡可能地充分利用所學的短語或句型來表述具體的內容。4. 反復審核,修改錯誤。5. 宜詳則詳,該略則略。對于一些細節方面的內容,如果是文章必不可少的,在寫作過程中是不可將其忽略的。6. 注意所給的漢語提示。一般說來,看圖寫話中的漢語提示往往給定了有關的時間、地點、人物等相關的信息,
1.
人們完成工作的方式通常有兩種:獨立完成與合作完成。兩種方式各有特點。請你以此為題,按照以下要點寫一篇英語短文。
獨立完成:自行安排,自己解決問題:
合作完成:一起討論,相互學習:
我喜歡的方式及理由:
寫作要求:
必須使用5個句子表達全部所給內容:
將5個句子組成連貫的短文:
開頭已經給出但不計入總詞數:
There are basically two ways to get work done. One is to work individually. 。。。
2.閱讀下面的短文,然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
The Nigerian postal service has witnessed a reduction in the number of letters sent, especially by individuals, due to the alternatives of email and text.
“People prefer these over letters, because of the speed, although letters serve many purposes, other than conveying of messages", said Barry Varley Tipton, principal of Cherry Field College.
But some people think that the vanishing(逐漸消失的) art of letter writing has grave (嚴重的) consequences for students, teachers, the economy, society and the beauty of reading from loved ones, because letters in those days usually had a variety of styles .
A lover of letters writing, Hajiya Aisha refers to the occasions she has seen people enraged, because their connections at a cyber cafe took 56 seconds rather than the usual 36 hours. She says, “Although letters are slow, waiting for something good is not wholly a bad thing. Nothing beats a hand written letter.”
"When I was a graduate studying overseas twenty five years ago, my mother wrote to me daily. It was wonderful to receive those letters. They often said nothing more than everyone was thinking of me. I continue this tradition with several friends who are scattered worldwide. Hand written letters show the love that we have for family and friends. Email cannot replace the smile of actually getting the letter. The warm, sincere thank- you note, or the sweetly scented love letter we usually received and sent in those days is irreplaceable" she said.
Will electronic age stamps replace letters? Hopefully not, since it takes with it a culture rich in colour, history, and communication. Letters, like bits of ourselves, deserve to be stored away for future readers, giving them insight into details as small as the price and pattern of stamps, and as great as personal insights exchanged long ago.
【寫作內容】
1. 以約30詞概括以上短文的主要內容:
2. 然后以約120個詞以“Will written letters die out ?”為主題寫一篇短文,并包括如下要點:
(1)有些人認為用手機收發短信和用因特網收發郵件更加方便快捷,寫信很費時間
(2)有些人喜歡和朋友或家人寫信
(3)你的觀點
【寫作要求】
1. 你可以使用實例或其他論述方法支持你的論點,也可以參照閱讀材料的內容,但不得直接引用閱讀材料中的句子
2. 作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱
【評分標準】
概括準確、語言規范、內容合適,篇章連貫。
(請在答題紙上作答)
3.最近,你校成立了一個心理咨詢室,取名為“心靈的港灣(Harbor For Your Soul)”。該咨詢室配有一名心理咨詢師,旨在為全校學生提供專業的心理咨詢服務。請你根據以下提示,為校英語墻報寫一篇120詞左右的報道。
名稱 心靈的港灣(Harbor For Your Soul)
成立時間 上周三
地點 圖書樓2樓
開放時間 每周一、二、四下午5:00-6:00
原因 目前高中生的學習負擔越來越重,心理問題日益突出
目的 提供心理指導,緩解心理壓力,促進身心健康發展
你的看法 ?
參考詞匯:psychological counseling room
心理咨詢室
psychologist 心理咨詢師
4.請根據以下提示,用英語寫一篇短文。
Hold fast to dreams, for if dreams die, life is a broken-winged bird that can never fly.
注意:1. 無須寫標題,不得照抄英語提示語;
2. 除詩歌外,文體不限;
3. 文中不得透露個人姓名和班級名稱;
4. 詞數為120左右。
你校學生會準備辦一期英語墻報,主題為:保護環境從我做起。請你根據下圖所示寫一篇英語短文。
disposable chopsticks
注意:1.詞數100個左右,開頭語已為你寫好;
2.可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
What Can I Do for Our Environment?
Everyone can do something for our environment.
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________
參考答案
1.
There are basically two ways to get work done. One is to work individually. In this way, people can decide for themselves when to start work and how to do it. What’s more, they will be able to learn how to solve problems on their own.
People may also choose to work in a team, where they can learn from each other and help each other. Besides, they may work out better ways to get work done by discussion.
Personally, I prefer to work in a team, which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and to share my experiences with them
【解析】
2.
Thanks to email and text, people nowadays make their communication quick and convenient, and fewer and fewer letters are written. However, it is still believed that written letters are irreplaceable.
It’s true that many people find it easy to send emails and text messages and often avoid writing letters completely. However, I don’t agree that written letters will gradually disappear.
First of all, it seems to me that letters written by people include a piece of soul and letters are a reflection of human emotions. For instance, using the Internet my sister still likes to receive ordinary letters by post, because they help her to feel a close bond with people living far away.
Secondly, for many years the written word was one of the most powerful tools in the world. Moreover, for many people, to write a letter is an element of their traditions. In many cases the Internet is not considered to be substitute for letters.
In conclusion, letters will never become extinct because of their importance to many generations of people.
Possible version II
Thanks to email and text, people nowadays make their communication quick and convenient, and fewer and fewer letters are written. However, it is still believed that written letters are irreplaceable.
There is no doubt that with the help of the Internet and cell phones, people find it easy and convenient to communicate with others. Compared with them, writing letters seems to be a waste of time.
On the other hand, however, some people do enjoy receiving letters from friends and families, and meanwhile, they prefer to write letters to keep in touch with them rather than send them emails or text them messages.
As far as I am concerned, letters written by people will never disappear. Firstly, it seems to me that they include a piece of soul and letters are a reflection of human emotions. Secondly, for many years the written word was one of the most powerful tools in the world. Moreover, for many people, to write a letter is an element of their traditions. In many cases the Internet is not considered to replace letters.
In conclusion, letters will never become extinct because of their importance to many generations of people.
【解析】略
3.With more and more students feeling stressed out, a psychological counseling room, named “Harbor For Your Soul” was opened in our school last Wednesday. It is on the second floor of the Library Building, open from 5:00 pm to 6:00 pm every Monday, Tuesday and Thursday afternoon.
A psychologist is on duty at the room and he will provide psychological guidance for students and help resolve their mental health issues and concerns.
As its name suggests, “Harbor For Your Soul” will become a place of peace for our souls.
There is no doubt that it will play an important role in our students’ healthy development, both physically and psychologically.
【解析】
試題分析:考查表格類作文的寫作。介紹學校心理咨詢室根據用英語寫一份報告There is no doubt that it will play an important role in our students’ healthy development, both physically and psychologically.用的就是同位語從句和固定句式,還要用適當的關聯詞把句與句連起來,如:for one thing,for another thing;what’s more等
4.
The meaning of life lies in holding fast to dreams. But the changing world seems telling me that people gradually get their dreams lost somehow in the process of growing up, and sometimes I personally find myself saying goodbye unconsciously to those distant childhood dreams.
However, we need dreams. They keep us going; they represent possibility even when we are dragged down by reality. Most successful people are dreams as well as ordinary people who are not afraid to think big and dare to be great. When we were little kids, we all dreamed of doing something big, something significant. Now what we need to do is to keep to them. However, the toughest part is that we often have no idea how to act out all your fantasies. Well, just start with concrete goals and stick to it. Don’t let the nameless fear confuse the eye and defeat our strong belief of future. Through our talents, through our intelligence, through our efforts and through our creativity, we will make it.
Hold fast to dreams, for when dreams go, life is a barren field frozen with snow. So my dear friends, think of your old and maybe dead dreams. Whatever it is, pick it up and make it alive from today.
【解析】
試題分析:考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個話題,并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高,要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時,首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型,在你的能力范圍之內,選擇句式時要賦予變化,因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞,把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體,如besides, further, last but not least等。在發表個人觀點的時候,可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮點說明】文章使用了很好的短語和句子:lie in 在于, in the process of 在…過程中,dreamed of夢想,stick to堅持,make it成功, Most successful people are dreams as well as ordinary people who are not afraid to think big and dare to be great. 這句話用了定語從句, Now what we need to do is to keep to them. 這句話用了主語從句,However, the toughest part is that we often have no idea how to act out all your fantasies. 這句話用了表語從句, Whatever it is, pick it up and make it alive from today.這句話用了讓步狀語從句??傊?,范文使用大量高中教材中出現的高級短語和句型,考生應該能做到學以致用。
考點:考查開放式作文
5.What Can I Do for Our Environment?
Everyone can do something for our environment.
For me, I should try to save electricity in my daily life. For example,if I am the last person to leave the classroom in the evening,I will always remember to turn off the lights. In order to protect our forests,I will use paper wisely. I should try to use both sides of paper whenever it is possible. I will not use things like paper cups and disposable chopsticks because they are made of wood.
I believe that doing all these small things will improve our environment and help make our world a better place to live in.
【解析】
試題分析:這是一篇看圖寫作,做題時:1. 認真讀圖,2. 初步構思,考慮用詞、短語、句型和時態。3. 連詞成句,然后再連句成文。盡可能地充分利用所學的短語或句型來表述具體的內容。4. 反復審核,修改錯誤。5. 宜詳則詳,該略則略。對于一些細節方面的內容,如果是文章必不可少的,在寫作過程中是不可將其忽略的。6. 注意所給的漢語提示。一般說來,看圖寫話中的漢語提示往往給定了有關的時間、地點、人物等相關的信息,