2024屆高考英語二輪專題訓練書面表達：7
高考英語二輪專題訓練 書面表達7
廣東省汕頭市金山中學2024屆高三第一學期期中考試英語
【題文】基礎寫作（共1小題，滿分15分）
你校將開展禁毒宣傳, 請你根據下面的表格內容和餅狀圖寫一篇短文。短文內容需包括青少年吸毒原因分析，介紹毒品危害并給同學們提出建議，以便讓同學們懂得如何遠離毒品。
【寫作內容】
毒品的
危害：
1.?????? 毒品交易日益泛濫，每年浪費8000億美元
青少年吸毒原因分析餅狀圖
2.嚴重危害健康，加速死亡
3.直接導致和誘發犯罪
遠離毒品的建議
1.不要和吸毒的人做朋友
2.保持樂觀的生活態度和健康的生活方式
【寫作要求】
1. 只能使用5個句子表達上述全部內容；
2.開頭已給出，不計入句子總數。
【評分標準】
句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章結構連貫。
?In modern society, drugs are becoming a more and more serious problem in the world. The trade of drugs is widespread, which costs up to $800 billion every year.
【答案】基礎寫作：
?In modern society, drugs are becoming a more and more serious problem in the world. The trade of drugs is widespread, which costs up to $800 billion every year.
???
As we know, drugs not only do great harm to our health, even causing people to die at an early age but also directly contributes to the happening of crimes.???As is shown on the chart above, 30% of the teenagers taking drugs are cheated into doing it, and 50% are driven by curiosity. Another 15% just seek excitements or try to get rid of their anxieties and he rest try it for some other reasons.
In my opinion ,in order to protect us students from drugs, we should be careful to make friends and stay away from those who always behave badly. Also, it’s very important for us to lead a healthy lifestyle and hold positive attitudes towards life.
河南省北大附中河南分校2024屆高三沖刺英語
【題文】書面表達（滿分25分）
假定你是李華，每當聽到“常回家看看”這首歌時，你都非常感動。向父母表達愛的方式
有很多種，請你根據以下要點，寫一篇演講稿號召同學們都要尊敬父母。
提示：1.經常幫助父母做一些力所能及的家務活；
2．經常關心父母的生活和身體健康狀況；
3．在父母生日時表達祝愿，讓他們知道我們的愛。
注意：1．詞數100左右；
2．可以適當發揮以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結尾部分已寫好，不計入總詞數。
My dear fellows,
Today I'd like to talk about love to our parents.
Many people are moved by the song Going home often when they hear it ,including me.
Thank you!
【答案】
廣東省湛江一中2024屆高三臨門一腳英語
【題文】讀寫任務 （共1小題，滿分25分）
閱讀下面短文，然后按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
One night when my wife was preparing dinner, our little son took a piece of paper to her which read:
For washing the car---- $5.00
Playing with little sister---- $0.25
Getting a good report card----$5.00
For sweeping the common corridor--- $2.00
Total ---$12.25
His mother looked at him standing there expecting payment. She picked up the pen and turning the paper over, this is what she wrote：
For 10 months I carried you---- No charge
For the toys, food and clothes ---- No charge
The full cost of my love ---- No charge
When he finished reading, he had big tears in his eyes. He looked at his mother and said, “Mummy, I love you!” Then he took the pen and in great big letters wrote on the “bill”: “All paid.”
【寫作內容】
1．以約30個詞概括上文的主要內容。
2. 以約120詞，以 “母愛” 談談你的想法，內容包括：
(1) 讀完故事后你的感受；
(2) 記一件有關母愛的感人事件；
(3) 你對母愛的看法。
【寫作要求】
1．作文中可以使用親身經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不能直接
引用原文中的句子。
2．作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。
【評分標準】
概括準確，語言規范，內容合適，語篇連貫。
【答案】任務寫作
Possible version
The writer’s son asked payment from his mum for the things he did. After reading what his mum wrote on the paper, the son realized her unconditional and priceless love, moved to tears.
After reading the story, I am also moved by the Mum’s selfless and priceless love for her son. Without saying the word “love”, the mother did what she could to express her deep love to her son. And her love gave her son a second life!
Talking of a mum’s love for her kid, I have never forgotten a story which touches me deeply in heart. A little boy had a serious disease. After a long time treatment, it seemed that doctors could do nothing to save him. He was frightened and became desperate, crying all day long. But his mother didn’t give up but consistently comforted him with loving, encouraging words and tender care. The boy gradually calmed down, then perseveringly fighting against the illness bravely, and eventually survived. It was his mum’s love for him that helped the boy conquer the great challenge in his life.
For me, Mum, a word that means the world to everyone, is the warmest word in their heart. Nothing can express more. A mother’s love is like a circle, which has no beginning and ending. It keeps going around and around, ever expanding and touching everyone who comes in touch with it. The circle surrounds them like the morning’s mist, warming them like the noontime sun, and covering them like a blanket of evening stars. Thus, remember her unconditional love and never forget to love her more than ever.
湖南省瀏陽一中、攸縣一中、醴陵一中2024屆高三聯考英語試題
【題文】
Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below.
伴隨我們成長，長輩們在不經意間老去。一曲《時間都去哪兒了》戳中了所有人的淚點，引起很多人的共鳴。相信你也會有些感觸。請以此為話題寫一篇短文：
內容：1. 你和一位長輩之間發生的一件事
2. 你的感觸和反思
注意：1.短文須寫在答題卡的指定區域;
2.短文詞數120詞左右;
3.內容充實，結構完整，語意連貫;
4.書寫清晰、工整;
One possible version:
The song Where Has the Time Gone moved many people, which also brought me back to an unforgettable incident between my grandpa and me.
When I was 13, my parent worked in Guangdong Province and I was take care of by my grandpa. I got addicted to computer games because of loneliness and learning-weariness. My parents were disappointed and angry, forcing me to drop out. But Grandpa said no. He decided to accompany me to school and waited for me outside till the end of class everyday. Until one day he was seriously ill, I was touched and felt guilty.
He used his own way to get me back from the wrong way. Now he is getting older and older. I can’t afford to buy him expensive gifts now, but I can help him with the housework. What’s more, I am determined to work harder to make him feel proud of me in the future.
【解析】
【技巧點撥】
1.主意審題，審清內容，時態，確定主題；
2.一定要使用亮點句型，重要語法現象，如：非謂語動詞，從句，倒裝句等；
3.恰當使用連接詞，讓上下文更加連貫；
4.注意卷面整潔，書寫標準。
河南省洛陽高中2024屆高三備考中原名校聯考英語
【題文】書面表達（滿分25分）
假設你是李平，剛被美國Brown University錄取，你的筆友Peter來信祝賀，請你用英文給他寫一封回信，告訴他你將于2024年4月19日到達美國，希望他能到機場接你并幫你找一住所。住所需包含以下信息：
※騎車大約30分鐘可到達學校；
※房間寬敞，明亮；設施齊全；
※允許自己做飯；
※房東能講地道的英語，健談，好客。
注意：1、詞數100左右
2、可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
Dear Peter,
Thank you for your congratulations on my admission to Brown University!
*****************************************************************************
Yours,
Li Ping
【答案】書面表達：
Dear Peter,
Thank you for your congratulations on my admission to Brown University!
I'll arrive in America on April 19th, and I'm wondering whether you can help find an apartment for me. Preferably, the location is near the campus, which makes it possible for me to go to the university by bike within thirty minutes. What’s more, I would like one apartment well furnished, spacious and bright, with a kitchen attached. If possible, I can cook myself. It will be better if the host can speak fluent English. Please let me know as soon as you find a suitable one. Besides, if it is convenient to you, would you please pick me up when I get to the station?
Thanks!
Yours，
Li Ping
上當受騙30%
好奇心50%
追求刺激,消除煩惱15%
其它5%
高考英語二輪專題訓練 書面表達7
廣東省汕頭市金山中學2024屆高三第一學期期中考試英語
【題文】基礎寫作（共1小題，滿分15分）
你校將開展禁毒宣傳, 請你根據下面的表格內容和餅狀圖寫一篇短文。短文內容需包括青少年吸毒原因分析，介紹毒品危害并給同學們提出建議，以便讓同學們懂得如何遠離毒品。
【寫作內容】
毒品的
危害：
1.?????? 毒品交易日益泛濫，每年浪費8000億美元
青少年吸毒原因分析餅狀圖
2.嚴重危害健康，加速死亡
3.直接導致和誘發犯罪
遠離毒品的建議
1.不要和吸毒的人做朋友
2.保持樂觀的生活態度和健康的生活方式
【寫作要求】
1. 只能使用5個句子表達上述全部內容；
2.開頭已給出，不計入句子總數。
【評分標準】
句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章結構連貫。
?In modern society, drugs are becoming a more and more serious problem in the world. The trade of drugs is widespread, which costs up to $800 billion every year.
【答案】基礎寫作：
?In modern society, drugs are becoming a more and more serious problem in the world. The trade of drugs is widespread, which costs up to $800 billion every year.
???
As we know, drugs not only do great harm to our health, even causing people to die at an early age but also directly contributes to the happening of crimes.???As is shown on the chart above, 30% of the teenagers taking drugs are cheated into doing it, and 50% are driven by curiosity. Another 15% just seek excitements or try to get rid of their anxieties and he rest try it for some other reasons.
In my opinion ,in order to protect us students from drugs, we should be careful to make friends and stay away from those who always behave badly. Also, it’s very important for us to lead a healthy lifestyle and hold positive attitudes towards life.
河南省北大附中河南分校2024屆高三沖刺英語
【題文】書面表達（滿分25分）
假定你是李華，每當聽到“常回家看看”這首歌時，你都非常感動。向父母表達愛的方式
有很多種，請你根據以下要點，寫一篇演講稿號召同學們都要尊敬父母。
提示：1.經常幫助父母做一些力所能及的家務活；
2．經常關心父母的生活和身體健康狀況；
3．在父母生日時表達祝愿，讓他們知道我們的愛。
注意：1．詞數100左右；
2．可以適當發揮以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結尾部分已寫好，不計入總詞數。
My dear fellows,
Today I'd like to talk about love to our parents.
Many people are moved by the song Going home often when they hear it ,including me.
Thank you!
【答案】
廣東省湛江一中2024屆高三臨門一腳英語
【題文】讀寫任務 （共1小題，滿分25分）
閱讀下面短文，然后按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
One night when my wife was preparing dinner, our little son took a piece of paper to her which read:
For washing the car---- $5.00
Playing with little sister---- $0.25
Getting a good report card----$5.00
For sweeping the common corridor--- $2.00
Total ---$12.25
His mother looked at him standing there expecting payment. She picked up the pen and turning the paper over, this is what she wrote：
For 10 months I carried you---- No charge
For the toys, food and clothes ---- No charge
The full cost of my love ---- No charge
When he finished reading, he had big tears in his eyes. He looked at his mother and said, “Mummy, I love you!” Then he took the pen and in great big letters wrote on the “bill”: “All paid.”
【寫作內容】
1．以約30個詞概括上文的主要內容。
2. 以約120詞，以 “母愛” 談談你的想法，內容包括：
(1) 讀完故事后你的感受；
(2) 記一件有關母愛的感人事件；
(3) 你對母愛的看法。
【寫作要求】
1．作文中可以使用親身經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不能直接
引用原文中的句子。
2．作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。
【評分標準】
概括準確，語言規范，內容合適，語篇連貫。
【答案】任務寫作
Possible version
The writer’s son asked payment from his mum for the things he did. After reading what his mum wrote on the paper, the son realized her unconditional and priceless love, moved to tears.
After reading the story, I am also moved by the Mum’s selfless and priceless love for her son. Without saying the word “love”, the mother did what she could to express her deep love to her son. And her love gave her son a second life!
Talking of a mum’s love for her kid, I have never forgotten a story which touches me deeply in heart. A little boy had a serious disease. After a long time treatment, it seemed that doctors could do nothing to save him. He was frightened and became desperate, crying all day long. But his mother didn’t give up but consistently comforted him with loving, encouraging words and tender care. The boy gradually calmed down, then perseveringly fighting against the illness bravely, and eventually survived. It was his mum’s love for him that helped the boy conquer the great challenge in his life.
For me, Mum, a word that means the world to everyone, is the warmest word in their heart. Nothing can express more. A mother’s love is like a circle, which has no beginning and ending. It keeps going around and around, ever expanding and touching everyone who comes in touch with it. The circle surrounds them like the morning’s mist, warming them like the noontime sun, and covering them like a blanket of evening stars. Thus, remember her unconditional love and never forget to love her more than ever.
湖南省瀏陽一中、攸縣一中、醴陵一中2024屆高三聯考英語試題
【題文】
Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below.
伴隨我們成長，長輩們在不經意間老去。一曲《時間都去哪兒了》戳中了所有人的淚點，引起很多人的共鳴。相信你也會有些感觸。請以此為話題寫一篇短文：
內容：1. 你和一位長輩之間發生的一件事
2. 你的感觸和反思
注意：1.短文須寫在答題卡的指定區域;
2.短文詞數120詞左右;
3.內容充實，結構完整，語意連貫;
4.書寫清晰、工整;
One possible version:
The song Where Has the Time Gone moved many people, which also brought me back to an unforgettable incident between my grandpa and me.
When I was 13, my parent worked in Guangdong Province and I was take care of by my grandpa. I got addicted to computer games because of loneliness and learning-weariness. My parents were disappointed and angry, forcing me to drop out. But Grandpa said no. He decided to accompany me to school and waited for me outside till the end of class everyday. Until one day he was seriously ill, I was touched and felt guilty.
He used his own way to get me back from the wrong way. Now he is getting older and older. I can’t afford to buy him expensive gifts now, but I can help him with the housework. What’s more, I am determined to work harder to make him feel proud of me in the future.
【解析】
【技巧點撥】
1.主意審題，審清內容，時態，確定主題；
2.一定要使用亮點句型，重要語法現象，如：非謂語動詞，從句，倒裝句等；
3.恰當使用連接詞，讓上下文更加連貫；
4.注意卷面整潔，書寫標準。
河南省洛陽高中2024屆高三備考中原名校聯考英語
【題文】書面表達（滿分25分）
假設你是李平，剛被美國Brown University錄取，你的筆友Peter來信祝賀，請你用英文給他寫一封回信，告訴他你將于2024年4月19日到達美國，希望他能到機場接你并幫你找一住所。住所需包含以下信息：
※騎車大約30分鐘可到達學校；
※房間寬敞，明亮；設施齊全；
※允許自己做飯；
※房東能講地道的英語，健談，好客。
注意：1、詞數100左右
2、可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
Dear Peter,
Thank you for your congratulations on my admission to Brown University!
*****************************************************************************
Yours,
Li Ping
【答案】書面表達：
Dear Peter,
Thank you for your congratulations on my admission to Brown University!
I'll arrive in America on April 19th, and I'm wondering whether you can help find an apartment for me. Preferably, the location is near the campus, which makes it possible for me to go to the university by bike within thirty minutes. What’s more, I would like one apartment well furnished, spacious and bright, with a kitchen attached. If possible, I can cook myself. It will be better if the host can speak fluent English. Please let me know as soon as you find a suitable one. Besides, if it is convenient to you, would you please pick me up when I get to the station?
Thanks!
Yours，
Li Ping
上當受騙30%
好奇心50%
追求刺激,消除煩惱15%
其它5%
