Shanghai is my favorite city. I like it because I was born in there, and a lot of my family members and my friends live there. The shopping in Shanghai is cheaper than here, but its expensive in China. I have a lot of things to do there, like: shopping, playing, going to my friends home And therere also a lot of places that are interesting. In Shanghai, people speak the same language as I do. I was there for 13 years! I left there on August, 18th, 2005. And I was there because I was born in there and I lived there.

　　上海是我最喜歡的城市，我喜歡它因為我在那里出生。而且我有很多的家人和朋友都住在那里。在上海購物要比這里便宜,但是在中國就昂貴了。我有很多事情要做，比如:購物，玩，去我的朋友家里而且還有很多有趣的地方。在上海,人們和我說的是同樣的語言。我在那里呆了13年了!我,2005年8月18號離開了那里。我在那里，是因為我在那里出生，我住在那里。

　　Therere a lot of people in Shanghai. The people are like me. We all speak the same language. The people in Shanghai are busy and friendly. And Shanghai is also and international city. Its beautiful and fancy. Therere a lot of tall buildings. Thats why Shanghai is my favorite city. Its my home city. I love Shanghai!!!

　　有很多人在上海。像我這樣的人。我們都說同樣的語言。上海的人都很忙也很友好。上海也是一個國際城市。它美麗和令人向往。那里有很多高大的建筑物。這就是為什么我最喜歡的城市是上海。這是我的家鄉。我愛上海! ! !

　　Id like to go back to Shanghai, but just for a visit. Although Shanghai is good, Id like to live here because Id like to study here. I only get a little homework and the air here is flasher than Shanghai. The weather is hot in Shanghai. And the best time of year to go there is spring, because in spring, the weather is cool and warm. But some people asked me: Why dont we go there in the fall? The fall is also cool and warm. I dont think so, because in Shanghai, the fall is still very hot. Id like to recommend this place to other because I want more and more people to know and visit my hometown. I hope if I ask my friends: Have you ever been to Shanghai? Do you like Shanghai? The answers shouldnt be: No, I havent been to Shanghai. And I dont even know anything about Shanghai! Now, Ill recommend you to go to visit Shanghai in summer vacation or winter vacation or spring break or every time youd like, youd want, because Shanghai is a very nice city. If you go there, youll soon like it!

　　我想回到上海，但只是去拜訪。雖然上海很好，但是我想住在這里，是因為我想在這里學習。我作業很少，這里的空氣比上海的好。上海的天氣很熱。一年之中最好去上海季節是春天，因為在春天那里的天氣是涼爽和溫暖的。但有些人問我:為什么我們不在秋天去那里?秋天也是涼爽和溫暖的。我不這么認為，因為在上海,秋天仍然很熱。我想推薦這個地方給其他人，是因為我希望越來越多的人了解和訪問我的家鄉。我希望如果我問我的朋友們：你去過上海嗎?你喜歡上海嗎?答案不會是：不,我沒有去過上海。我甚至對上海一無所知!現在，我將推薦你在暑假或者寒假或春假或者是隨時你想去的時候去上海，因為上海是一個非常美麗的城市。如果你去那里，你很快就會喜歡它!

　　Shanghai is my favorite city. I like it because I was born in there, and a lot of my family members and my friends live there. The shopping in Shanghai is cheaper than here, but its expensive in China. I have a lot of things to do there, like: shopping, playing, going to my friends home And therere also a lot of places that are interesting. In Shanghai, people speak the same language as I do. I was there for 13 years! I left there on August, 18th, 2005. And I was there because I was born in there and I lived there.

　　上海是我最喜歡的城市，我喜歡它因為我在那里出生。而且我有很多的家人和朋友都住在那里。在上海購物要比這里便宜,但是在中國就昂貴了。我有很多事情要做，比如:購物，玩，去我的朋友家里而且還有很多有趣的地方。在上海,人們和我說的是同樣的語言。我在那里呆了13年了!我,2005年8月18號離開了那里。我在那里，是因為我在那里出生，我住在那里。

　　Therere a lot of people in Shanghai. The people are like me. We all speak the same language. The people in Shanghai are busy and friendly. And Shanghai is also and international city. Its beautiful and fancy. Therere a lot of tall buildings. Thats why Shanghai is my favorite city. Its my home city. I love Shanghai!!!

　　有很多人在上海。像我這樣的人。我們都說同樣的語言。上海的人都很忙也很友好。上海也是一個國際城市。它美麗和令人向往。那里有很多高大的建筑物。這就是為什么我最喜歡的城市是上海。這是我的家鄉。我愛上海! ! !

　　Id like to go back to Shanghai, but just for a visit. Although Shanghai is good, Id like to live here because Id like to study here. I only get a little homework and the air here is flasher than Shanghai. The weather is hot in Shanghai. And the best time of year to go there is spring, because in spring, the weather is cool and warm. But some people asked me: Why dont we go there in the fall? The fall is also cool and warm. I dont think so, because in Shanghai, the fall is still very hot. Id like to recommend this place to other because I want more and more people to know and visit my hometown. I hope if I ask my friends: Have you ever been to Shanghai? Do you like Shanghai? The answers shouldnt be: No, I havent been to Shanghai. And I dont even know anything about Shanghai! Now, Ill recommend you to go to visit Shanghai in summer vacation or winter vacation or spring break or every time youd like, youd want, because Shanghai is a very nice city. If you go there, youll soon like it!

　　我想回到上海，但只是去拜訪。雖然上海很好，但是我想住在這里，是因為我想在這里學習。我作業很少，這里的空氣比上海的好。上海的天氣很熱。一年之中最好去上海季節是春天，因為在春天那里的天氣是涼爽和溫暖的。但有些人問我:為什么我們不在秋天去那里?秋天也是涼爽和溫暖的。我不這么認為，因為在上海,秋天仍然很熱。我想推薦這個地方給其他人，是因為我希望越來越多的人了解和訪問我的家鄉。我希望如果我問我的朋友們：你去過上海嗎?你喜歡上海嗎?答案不會是：不,我沒有去過上海。我甚至對上海一無所知!現在，我將推薦你在暑假或者寒假或春假或者是隨時你想去的時候去上海，因為上海是一個非常美麗的城市。如果你去那里，你很快就會喜歡它!