Yours sincerely

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Sir or Madam， Your advertisement for a staff member in May 10,China daily interested me，because the position your provide(應(yīng)該用過去時，因為廣告已經(jīng)刊登) there exactly like the kind of job I am seeking for. Accoring(拼寫錯誤providing)to your advertisement，you need a staff who is highly educated and has some related woking(拼寫錯誤) experience. I think I meet the requirements above. I graduated form(拼寫錯誤) ShangHai(h不用大寫) University with a(m的發(fā)音是以元音開頭，所以要用an) M.S.degree(最好不要用縮寫). And I had worked in a relevent(拼寫錯誤，relevant)company before. (這里可以再補充以下你有經(jīng)驗)Whats more, I had passed CET-6, and I can communicate with the native speaker(建議用復數(shù)) freely in English. I am a very friendly person who can quickly built friendship with others of all ages. Thank you for your time and consideration. I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely(要有逗號) Li Ming(落款部分寫在右下角) 點評：6-7分拼寫錯誤有點多，另外一些格式上的規(guī)則要注意。第二段的第一條內(nèi)容簡化一下。