短文改錯(一)

　　A(2024·鄭州第三次質量預測)About a month ago－brown.When I took a look at it！I told them to move away the bomb.Fortunatelyen I went home.The next day，I heard that the police had blown the bomb up.It had been on the sand for over 60 years!

　　答案： already finished my homework，and I wanted to relax.Suddenly，I saw two children

　　on the beach.They

　　to have found something made of metal，which was big and reddish－brown.When I took a look at it that it was an old bomb！I told them to move

　　the bomb.Fortunately，I had a mobile phone

　　with me，so I called the police and told them

　　had been found.About 15 minutes ，the police arrived.I was praised for it

　　then I went home.The next day，I heard that the police had blown the bomb up.It had been

　　the sand for over 60 years!

　　B

　　I was asked to be a student teacher last week.My China teacher required me to give a lesson in my class.It was a first time that I had stood before class.I was thankful for her，because I had dreamed to be a teacher all the time.Considered that the class wouldn’t listen to me，I felt so nervous that I could fall asleep the night before.On the morning to give the lesson，I found it heavy to move my foot.At first，I can hardly speak fluently.Otherwise，I found myself much more relaxed gradually，because my classmates looked at me encouragingly.Finally，I finished the lesson smooth.I will remember my this experience forever.

　　答案： teacher required me to give a lesson in my class.It was

　　first time that I had stood before class.I was thankful

　　her，because I had dreamed to be a teacher all the time. that the class wouldn’t listen to me，I felt so nervous that I / fall asleep the night before.On the morning to give the lesson，I found it heavy to move my .At first，I

　　hardly speak fluently.，I found myself much more relaxed gradually，because my classmates looked at me encouragingly.Finally，I finished the lesson .I will remember

　　this/my

　　experience forever.

　　C

　　(2024·河南畢業班高考適應性練習)！It is two months that I left China and came to London.n of about 7 millions.It’s also a very busy place.People here are usually friendly and helpfully，but they are often in hurry.What have impressed me most is that the weather is chopping and changing.Now I understand why the English people always talked about the weather.London has many famous places of interests for people to visit.I have just gone to British Museum and Hyde Park recently.

　　How are things going with yourself？I miss you and our friends very much.I hope I can hear from you as often as I can.Best wishes!

　　Yours，

　　Wang Lin

　　答案：！It is two months ，London is the capital of Britain，which is on the bank of River Thames.It’s a big city with a population of about 7 .It’s also a very busy place.People here are usually friendly and ，but they are often in

　　hurry.What

　　impressed me most is that the weather is chopping and changing.Now I understand why the English people always

　　about the weather.London has many famous places of

　　for people to visit.I have just

　　to British Museum and Hyde Park recently.

　　How are things going with ？I miss you and our friends very much.I hope I can hear from you as often as I can.D

　　(2024·太原第二階段測評)I’ve been very busy recently，for I’ve been preparing for coming exam，which is vitally for me and my future life.Last week，I attended an English speech contest intend for high school students all over the province and I win the first prize.I’ve always been dreaming of having an opportunity to travel in English－speaking countries like your to practise and improve my English.However答案： and happy to hear that you’re coming to China.Since your trip is scheduled for the middle of July，time is not a problem for me because

　　I will be having my summer vacation at that time.

　　I’ve been very busy recently，for I’ve been preparing for

　　coming exam，which is

　　for me and my future life.Last week，I attended an English speech contest

　　for high school students all over the province and I

　　the first prize.I’ve always been dreaming of having an opportunity to travel in English－speaking countries like ，I also want to make

　　with people from other countries.

　　I am looking forward to

　　you.

　　Yours，

　　Dai Hong

　　E

　　Recently our local government has decided to broaden a narrow road and there is a temple of over 100 years old along a road.Whether the temple should pulled down have caused a heated discussion.

　　Some agree that we should pull it down to carrying out the construction project because it can solve some traffic problem and make our life convenient.Beside，it helps improve the image of our city.But the people who are for the idea believe that we can have another one solution.How should we pull it down？The temple has a long history and tells us something of our city.We can move it away and keep it as long as we like.答案： road.Whether the temple should

　　pulled down

　　caused a heated discussion.

　　Some agree that we should pull it down to

　　out the construction project because it can solve some traffic

　　and make our life convenient.，it helps improve the image of our city.But the people who are

　　the idea believe that we can have another

　　solution. should we pull it down？The temple has a long history and tells us something of our city.We can move it away and keep it as long as we like. been no conclusion over the matter.

　　F

　　(2024·齊魯名校高三第一次聯考)My favourite sport is football.I was a member of our school football team.We practise for three times every week and often watch football match on TV together.Play football not only makes us grow tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit.We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ourselves.Also，the sport teaches us the important of obedience (服從) .Each player must obey a captainbreak the rules too often if we want to win the game.

　　答案： a member of our school football team.We practise

　　three times every week and often watch football

　　on TV together. football not only makes us grow tall and strong but also

　　us a sense of fair play and team spirit.We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead

　　ourselves.Also，the sport teaches us the

　　of obedience (服從) .Each player must obey

　　is the leader of the team.And

　　must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game.

　　G

　　(2024·陜西一聯)nly one child，who is very common in Chinese families.My father work in a factory and my mother is a teacher.We lived a happy life together.

　　I’m cheerful boy.Besides my courses，I have much hobbies，like playing football，basketball and swimming.In the past，I collected in a lot of stamps，which are very preciously now because we seldom post a letter nowadays.I wonder if you can tell me something about myself，your family and daily school.

　　Best wishes，

　　Li Hua

　　答案： Hua.This is my last year of high school，and I’ll graduate this summer.I’m eighteen

　　old.

　　There

　　three people in my family and I’m the only one child， is very common in Chinese families.My father

　　in a factory and my mother is a teacher.We

　　a happy life together.

　　I’m

　　cheerful boy.Besides my courses，I have

　　hobbies，like playing football，basketball and swimming.In the past，I collected

　　a lot of stamps，which are very

　　now because we seldom post a letter nowadays.I wonder if you can tell me something about ，your family and daily school.

　　Best wishes，

　　Li Hua

　　H

　　(2024·河南南陽三次聯Last summer I went to Xi’an with my parents.We had visited many places of interest as the temperature was over 38℃.Finally we climbed Mount Hua.It is very high and steep.We had to be careful in case we might fall off the cliff.It took us six hour to get to the summit.How beautiful scenery it was！You could see many mountains and rivers in distance.In the

　　night we

　　stayed in a cave hotel.I couldn’t go to asleep because the wind was blowing heavily.I am afraid the mountain would break down.The next morning we got up early in order to see the sun rise from the east.The sun was very big and red.How exciting we were!

　　答案： visited many places of interest

　　the temperature was over 38℃.Finally we climbed Mount Hua.It is very high and steep.We had to be careful in case we might fall off the cliff.It took us six

　　to get to the summit. beautiful scenery it was！ distance.In the

　　night we

　　stayed in a cave hotel.I couldn’t go to

　　because the wind was blowing heavily.I

　　afraid the mountain would break down.The next morning we got up early in order to see the sun rise

　　the east.The sun was very big and red.How

　　we were!

　　短文改錯(二)A

　　Tina and I had been good friend for years.We often did things together，so one day Tina didn’t talk to me and just sat by herself.I don’t know what was wrong.I thought about what I had done and said recent.Was Tina upset because I had done well in the history test than her？No there Tina was sitting.“Tina，”I said softly，“Is anything wrong？”He answered sadly答案： for years.We often did things together， one day Tina didn’t talk to me and just sat by herself.I

　　know what was wrong.I thought about what I had done and said .Was Tina upset because I had done

　　in the history test than her？No find out what was the matter.I walked over to

　　Tina was sitting.“Tina，”I said softly，“Is anything wrong？” last night.”I finally knew the reason

　　she didn’t talk to me and comforted her.

　　B

　　(2024·河北唐山統一考試)Television plays important part in our life. It shows us program, ntertainment. A television set can be used for another things as well. You can record shows and films for late viewing, watch DVDs, or even play video games.

　　Television was

　　being developed over 80

　　years,

　　influenced our life ever since.

　　答案： important part in our life. It shows us ， like the news and sports events.

　　We can watch films, listen to interviews and

　　the sounds of events that

　　far away. Television

　　us about countries and cultures

　　we can enjoy entertainment. A television set can be used for

　　things as well. You can record shows and films for

　　viewing, watch DVDs, or even play video games.

　　Television was

　　developed over 80

　　years， our life ever since.

　　C

　　(2024·鄭州第二次質量預測)Mandy，

　　I’m not doing well in my lessons at school, especial in

　　maths.My dad says I must try hard because he wants me go to

　　university.He thinks I’m lazy，but it’s not true.I work really hard，often study late into the night！I’ve tried to talk to my

　　mothertold my dad, all he said

　　was, “You mustn’t waste your time in art.You must focus your

　　mind on your lessons ！” I’m feeling quite puzzling about what to

　　do now.Would you please help me out?答案： in maths. My dad says I must try hard because he wants me

　　go to university. He thinks I’m lazy, but it’s not true. I work really hard, often

　　late into the night! I’ve tried to talk to my mother, but she always

　　I have to work as hard

　　my brother does. My brother doesn’t study very hard,

　　he always gets excellent grades. It’s not fair!

　　The only thing I like

　　is art. My teacher says I’m the best student she’s had for . When I told my dad, all he said was, “You mustn’t waste your time

　　art. You must focus your mind on your lessons！”I’m feeling quite D

　　(2024·山西四校第三次聯考)en，

　　Welcome to our English Corner.This corner was set up three years before.Every Sunday morning，students from different schools and some foreigners often took part in it.Gather around here，we practise spoken English by talking about everything we are interested.We also exchange my experience in English study.We all have a good time here.Thousands of people have been here when it was set up.

　　We think that they have learned a lot by taking part in activity here.It is a really supplement to our English class and it is welcome by students，their parents and teachers.They all think it is of helpful.If you want to know much about the corner，you may talk to the students here.

　　答案：ner was set up three years .Every Sunday morning，students from different schools and some foreigners often

　　part in it. around here，we practise spoken English by talking about everything we are interested ． experience in English study.We all have a good time here.Thousands of people have been here

　　it was set up.

　　We think that they have learned a lot by taking part in

　　here.It is a

　　supplement to our English class and it is welcome by students，their parents and teachers.They all think it is / .If you want to know

　　about the corner，you may talk to the students here.

　　E

　　Good morning everyone，since two managers wanted in the E－reading room－hearted personHowever，I firmly believe I am a ideal person for the job.

　　I hoped I will have the honor.Thank you for your consideration.

　　答案： wanted in the E－reading roomcommend

　　to you for the job.

　　I am from Class 8，Senior 2.I think I am fit for the job.To begin with，I can operate

　　a computer .Secondly，being a warm－hearted person

　　some voluntary work for .Lastly，I have good communication skills.I believe I can

　　what the students need.，I firmly believe I am

　　ideal person for the job.

　　I

　　I will have the honor.Thank you for your consideration.

　　F

　　Yesterday I stepped into a restaurant for lunch.As I was waiting my order to come，I noticed the old man in a wheelchair roll himself over to a table.No one and me seemed to notice him.I got up and go over to his table and asked if that I could get him something to drink.He smiled and said，“Thank you.You are generously.I’d like any orange juice，please.”When I was getting ready to leave，I walked by the old man’s table to saying goodbye.He thanked me again and told me I had made his

　　days，coming over and helping him out.I gave him a hug and told him he had made my day，either.

　　答案：ant for lunch.As I was waiting

　　my order to come，I noticed

　　old man in a wheelchair roll himself over to a table.No one

　　me seemed to notice him.I got up and

　　over to his table and asked if

　　I could get him something to drink.He smiled and said，“Thank you.You are .I’d like

　　orange juice，please.”When I was getting ready to leave，I walked by the old man’s table to

　　goodbye.He thanked me again and told me I had made his ，coming over and helping him out.I gave him a hug and told him he had made my day，.

　　G

　　In the countryside there are some children dropped out of school.The reasons of this are different.Some families are very poor to afford the education of their children.Some parents think useless for girls to attend school，so that their daughters lost the chance.Some children are unwilling to attend school for lack of interests in their studies.In my opinion，every child should have the chance to receive an education，whether boys and girls.Besides，the government should take effect measures to guarantee children’s right of education because we will play important roles in developing our country in the future.